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11 Nov 2009

FreeVerse: The Hollow Men

freeverse17Today marks the 91st anniversary of the end of World War I, The Great War, The War to End All Wars.

I heard this really sad story on the radio about a Canadian Soldier who was shot at 10:58 AM on November 11th, 1918.  He was the last soldier killed in WWI.

If there is one good thing to have come out of the War, besides the formation of certain countries that had been swallowed up by Prussia and the Austria-Hungary Empire, it is the generation of great writers that followed.  From Tolkien to Hemmingway, the impetus for some of the 20th Century’s best literature came out of the atrocities of that war.  Writers of that generation, whether they served in the military or bore witness as civilians, would forever struggle with its shadow.

And so for today’s FreeVerse I’m going to share my all-time favorite poem, which was inspired by World War I, and served as a heedless warning for the next generations.

The Hollow Men 
by T.S. Eliot

Mistah Kurtz—he dead.

      A penny for the Old Guy

      I

We are the hollow men
We are the stuffed men
Leaning together
Headpiece filled with straw. Alas!
Our dried voices, when
We whisper together
Are quiet and meaningless
As wind in dry grass
Or rats’ feet over broken glass
In our dry cellar

Shape without form, shade without colour,
Paralysed force, gesture without motion;

Those who have crossed
With direct eyes, to death’s other Kingdom
Remember us—if at all—not as lost
Violent souls, but only
As the hollow men
The stuffed men.

      II

Eyes I dare not meet in dreams
In death’s dream kingdom
These do not appear:
There, the eyes are
Sunlight on a broken column
There, is a tree swinging
And voices are
In the wind’s singing
More distant and more solemn
Than a fading star.

Let me be no nearer
In death’s dream kingdom
Let me also wear
Such deliberate disguises
Rat’s coat, crowskin, crossed staves
In a field
Behaving as the wind behaves
No nearer—

Not that final meeting
In the twilight kingdom

      III

This is the dead land
This is cactus land
Here the stone images
Are raised, here they receive
The supplication of a dead man’s hand
Under the twinkle of a fading star.

Is it like this
In death’s other kingdom
Waking alone
At the hour when we are
Trembling with tenderness
Lips that would kiss
Form prayers to broken stone.

      IV

The eyes are not here
There are no eyes here
In this valley of dying stars
In this hollow valley
This broken jaw of our lost kingdoms

In this last of meeting places
We grope together
And avoid speech
Gathered on this beach of the tumid river

Sightless, unless
The eyes reappear
As the perpetual star
Multifoliate rose
Of death’s twilight kingdom
The hope only
Of empty men.

      V

Here we go round the prickly pear
Prickly pear prickly pear
Here we go round the prickly pear
At five o’clock in the morning.

Between the idea
And the reality
Between the motion
And the act
Falls the Shadow
                                For Thine is the Kingdom

Between the conception
And the creation
Between the emotion
And the response
Falls the Shadow
                                Life is very long

Between the desire
And the spasm
Between the potency
And the existence
Between the essence
And the descent
Falls the Shadow
                                For Thine is the Kingdom

For Thine is
Life is
For Thine is the

This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
Not with a bang but a whimper.
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5 Responses to “FreeVerse: The Hollow Men”

  1. Cara Powers says:
    November 11, 2009 at 2:49 pm

    Ooh, I thought about posting a YouTube video of this poem today. There are some really good ones.

  2. Nymeth says:
    November 12, 2009 at 12:58 am

    WWI poetry really is wonderful. And that poor Canadian soldier :/

  3. Tracie Yule says:
    November 13, 2009 at 12:19 pm

    I’ve never read this poem before, but it is incredibly sad. I love how it focuses on the soldiers and how the war last far beyond it’s end.

  4. Serena (Savvy Verse & Wit) says:
    November 19, 2009 at 8:48 am

    I haven’t read much WWI poetry, but this one is a good one

  5. Jenners says:
    November 25, 2009 at 5:10 pm

    Powerful stuff here. And how sad to be the last person shot in a war (not that it is any worse to be the first)… it seems like just a little bit longer and maybe you would have made it out alive.).

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